Date: February 26, 2008 @ 5:10 PM
ahhh The black hair...,.
Cool progression and choice of melodic structure.I find the sounds very midi sounding but good for a work in progress thing...hopefully you'll change those sounds to something less mechanical and some velocity adjustments in the piano might work good for it too.Some real good lead solo melody.Good job!
Date: March 19, 2008 @ 4:41 AM
Needs a little more filling in this pie, I think. It's well-done, has a nice melody, but it seems to be full of air, if you get my drift. And Ethan, I know you can do it. I like this one, but it seems to need a little something.
ViciousKitty
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